From 8b2c69c33e0c654fa61b43383c6d821c36153f60 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Egor Tensin Date: Sat, 13 May 2017 04:35:52 +0300 Subject: grammar tweaks --- 20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn | 2 +- README.md | 8 ++++---- Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn | 4 ++-- Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn | 2 +- Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn | 6 +++--- all.pgn | 2 +- 6 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn b/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn index 2575e99..7cee3c5 100644 --- a/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn +++ b/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ [Termination "egor_tensin won by checkmate"] [Annotator "egor_tensin"] -{The first 15+10 game I've played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost +{The first 15+10 game I played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost like a billion rating points in case of a loss, hence the relief after I won. Also, a pretty pawn sacrifice (like a bait) that my opponent swallowed, allowing me to checkmate him.} diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index fbb7966..0574353 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ put. I'm a terrible chess player, so the quality of my play is generally awful. Hanging pieces and blunders galore! -However, some of the games I've played are memorable for me for one reason or +However, some of the games I played are memorable for me for one reason or another. -It may have been an epiphany I've been enlightened with while looking for a -move, or a picturesque, unusual position, or the fact that I was simply in a -good mood while playing a game. +It may be an epiphany I was enlightened with while looking for a move, or a +picturesque, unusual position, or the fact that I was simply in a good mood +while playing. The quality of my play is generally not one of the factors that decide whether the game will end up in this collection or not. What happens most often is that a) I'm on a winning streak (or win a game after diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn index 6050977..0515c56 100644 --- a/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn +++ b/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn @@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ Nd4.}) 20.b5 Nh7 21.Bxd4 exd4 22.Rxe8+ Qxe8 -23.Ne4 {I for some reason thought I was a bit worse in this position, so tried -to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 +23.Ne4 {For some reason I thought I was a bit worse in this position, so I +tried to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 24.Nxd6 (24.Qa4 {was much better, grabbing the pawn on a7.}) 24...Qxd6 diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn index 9bb59ae..ea08fd8 100644 --- a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn +++ b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ {A very messy game. I was completely and utterly lost, but played on for the sake of it and convinced my opponent to accept a draw offer. By far the -trickiest rook endgame I've played.} +trickiest rook endgame I've ever played.} 1.e4 e5 2.Nf3 d6 3.Bc4 h6 diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn index e35128b..9f06802 100644 --- a/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn +++ b/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn @@ -86,8 +86,8 @@ Nd4.}) 20.b5 Nh7 21.Bxd4 exd4 22.Rxe8+ Qxe8 -23.Ne4 {I for some reason thought I was a bit worse in this position, so tried -to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 +23.Ne4 {For some reason I thought I was a bit worse in this position, so I +tried to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 24.Nxd6 (24.Qa4 {was much better, grabbing the pawn on a7.}) 24...Qxd6 @@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ draw somewhere around here! Gutsy.} {A very messy game. I was completely and utterly lost, but played on for the sake of it and convinced my opponent to accept a draw offer. By far the -trickiest rook endgame I've played.} +trickiest rook endgame I've ever played.} 1.e4 e5 2.Nf3 d6 3.Bc4 h6 diff --git a/all.pgn b/all.pgn index e812668..6e99e95 100644 --- a/all.pgn +++ b/all.pgn @@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ on d2.}) [Termination "egor_tensin won by checkmate"] [Annotator "egor_tensin"] -{The first 15+10 game I've played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost +{The first 15+10 game I played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost like a billion rating points in case of a loss, hence the relief after I won. Also, a pretty pawn sacrifice (like a bait) that my opponent swallowed, allowing me to checkmate him.} -- cgit v1.2.3