From 8b2c69c33e0c654fa61b43383c6d821c36153f60 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Egor Tensin Date: Sat, 13 May 2017 04:35:52 +0300 Subject: grammar tweaks --- Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn | 4 ++-- Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn | 2 +- Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn | 6 +++--- 3 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'Vladimir_VP') diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn index 6050977..0515c56 100644 --- a/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn +++ b/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn @@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ Nd4.}) 20.b5 Nh7 21.Bxd4 exd4 22.Rxe8+ Qxe8 -23.Ne4 {I for some reason thought I was a bit worse in this position, so tried -to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 +23.Ne4 {For some reason I thought I was a bit worse in this position, so I +tried to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 24.Nxd6 (24.Qa4 {was much better, grabbing the pawn on a7.}) 24...Qxd6 diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn index 9bb59ae..ea08fd8 100644 --- a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn +++ b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ {A very messy game. I was completely and utterly lost, but played on for the sake of it and convinced my opponent to accept a draw offer. By far the -trickiest rook endgame I've played.} +trickiest rook endgame I've ever played.} 1.e4 e5 2.Nf3 d6 3.Bc4 h6 diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn index e35128b..9f06802 100644 --- a/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn +++ b/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn @@ -86,8 +86,8 @@ Nd4.}) 20.b5 Nh7 21.Bxd4 exd4 22.Rxe8+ Qxe8 -23.Ne4 {I for some reason thought I was a bit worse in this position, so tried -to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 +23.Ne4 {For some reason I thought I was a bit worse in this position, so I +tried to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6 24.Nxd6 (24.Qa4 {was much better, grabbing the pawn on a7.}) 24...Qxd6 @@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ draw somewhere around here! Gutsy.} {A very messy game. I was completely and utterly lost, but played on for the sake of it and convinced my opponent to accept a draw offer. By far the -trickiest rook endgame I've played.} +trickiest rook endgame I've ever played.} 1.e4 e5 2.Nf3 d6 3.Bc4 h6 -- cgit v1.2.3