rephrase my EMC experience

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/cv.tex b/cv.tex
index 9314de0..b01a21a 100644
--- a/cv.tex
+++ b/cv.tex
@@ -123,6 +123,7 @@ which extends the technology to cover mainstream database solutions.
   \item C programming.
   \item ELF file format.
   \item Intricate Linux APIs.
+  \item x86-64 architecture.
 \end{itemize}
 \end{CvWorkplaceDescription}
 
@@ -181,11 +182,10 @@ etc.).
 \CvWorkplaceHeader{April 2012}{May 2014}{Performance Engineer}{EMC Corp.}{russia.emc.com}
 
 \begin{CvWorkplaceDescription}
-I developed and maintained a tool for revealing, analyzing and solving storage
-system performance issues, specifically process \& thread synchronization
-issues.
-I also troubleshooted general performance issues within enterprise storage
-systems, including profiling, benchmarking, etc.
+I was a member of a performance team, responsible for revealing, analyzing and
+solving storage system performance issues, with the focus on process \& thread
+synchronization issues.
+This included developing specialized tools, using profilers, benchmarking, etc.
 
 \begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
   \item Native Microsoft Windows \& Linux development.
@@ -194,25 +194,7 @@ systems, including profiling, benchmarking, etc.
   \item C \& x86(-64) assembly language programming.
   \item Microsoft Windows kernel debugging.
   \item Performance profiling.
-\end{itemize}
-\end{CvWorkplaceDescription}
-
-\CvWorkplaceHeader{May 2012}{September 2013}{Software Engineer}{Lanit-Tercom, Inc.}{www.lanit-tercom.ru}
-
-\begin{CvWorkplaceDescription}
-I took part in a R\&D on the impact introduced to the performance of a storage
-system by process \& thread synchronization issues.
-A prototype of a tool for revealing, analyzing and solving specific storage
-system performance issues was developed.
-
-\begin{itemize}[noitemsep]
-  \item Native Microsoft Windows development.
-  \item Microsoft Windows kernel module development.
-  \item C \& x86(-64) assembly language programming.
-  \item Python programming.
-  \item Microsoft Windows kernel debugging.
   \item x86(-64) architecture.
-  \item Undocumented Microsoft Windows features.
 \end{itemize}
 \end{CvWorkplaceDescription}