grammar tweaks

6 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn b/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn
index 2575e99..7cee3c5 100644
--- a/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn
+++ b/20170120_DeeperBlue16_vs_egor_tensin.pgn
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 [Termination "egor_tensin won by checkmate"]
 [Annotator "egor_tensin"]
 
-{The first 15+10 game I've played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost
+{The first 15+10 game I played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost
 like a billion rating points in case of a loss, hence the relief after I won.
 Also, a pretty pawn sacrifice (like a bait) that my opponent swallowed,
 allowing me to checkmate him.}
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index fbb7966..0574353 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ put.
 
 I'm a terrible chess player, so the quality of my play is generally awful.
 Hanging pieces and blunders galore!
-However, some of the games I've played are memorable for me for one reason or
+However, some of the games I played are memorable for me for one reason or
 another.
-It may have been an epiphany I've been enlightened with while looking for a
-move, or a picturesque, unusual position, or the fact that I was simply in a
-good mood while playing a game.
+It may be an epiphany I was enlightened with while looking for a move, or a
+picturesque, unusual position, or the fact that I was simply in a good mood
+while playing.
 The quality of my play is generally not one of the factors that decide whether
 the game will end up in this collection or not.
 What happens most often is that a) I'm on a winning streak (or win a game after
diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
index 6050977..0515c56 100644
--- a/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
+++ b/Vladimir_VP/02. 20150910_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ Nd4.})
 20.b5 Nh7
 21.Bxd4 exd4
 22.Rxe8+ Qxe8
-23.Ne4 {I for some reason thought I was a bit worse in this position, so tried
-to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6
+23.Ne4 {For some reason I thought I was a bit worse in this position, so I
+tried to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6
 24.Nxd6
   (24.Qa4 {was much better, grabbing the pawn on a7.})
 24...Qxd6
diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
index 9bb59ae..ea08fd8 100644
--- a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
+++ b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 {A very messy game. I was completely and utterly lost, but played on for the
 sake of it and convinced my opponent to accept a draw offer. By far the
-trickiest rook endgame I've played.}
+trickiest rook endgame I've ever played.}
 1.e4 e5
 2.Nf3 d6
 3.Bc4 h6
diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn
index e35128b..9f06802 100644
--- a/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn
+++ b/Vladimir_VP/Vladimir_VP.pgn
@@ -86,8 +86,8 @@ Nd4.})
 20.b5 Nh7
 21.Bxd4 exd4
 22.Rxe8+ Qxe8
-23.Ne4 {I for some reason thought I was a bit worse in this position, so tried
-to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6
+23.Ne4 {For some reason I thought I was a bit worse in this position, so I
+tried to exchange as many pieces as possible.} Qe6
 24.Nxd6
   (24.Qa4 {was much better, grabbing the pawn on a7.})
 24...Qxd6
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ draw somewhere around here! Gutsy.}
 
 {A very messy game. I was completely and utterly lost, but played on for the
 sake of it and convinced my opponent to accept a draw offer. By far the
-trickiest rook endgame I've played.}
+trickiest rook endgame I've ever played.}
 1.e4 e5
 2.Nf3 d6
 3.Bc4 h6
diff --git a/all.pgn b/all.pgn
index e812668..6e99e95 100644
--- a/all.pgn
+++ b/all.pgn
@@ -1183,7 +1183,7 @@ on d2.})
 [Termination "egor_tensin won by checkmate"]
 [Annotator "egor_tensin"]
 
-{The first 15+10 game I've played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost
+{The first 15+10 game I played after a long blitz vacation. I would've lost
 like a billion rating points in case of a loss, hence the relief after I won.
 Also, a pretty pawn sacrifice (like a bait) that my opponent swallowed,
 allowing me to checkmate him.}