grammar tweaks

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
index 1f7c73d..9bafe3c 100644
--- a/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
+++ b/Vladimir_VP/08. 20150915_egor_tensin_vs_Vladimir_VP.pgn
@@ -53,7 +53,8 @@ I'm only a pawn down.})
 31.Qxc6 Qc5
 32.Qa4 Rab8
 33.b4 Qb6
-34.e5 Bxe5 {My opponent got scared, probably.}
+34.e5 Bxe5 {My opponent got scared, probably. Still completely winning for
+Black.}
   (34...Bc5)
 35.Rxe5+ Kf8
 36.Qb3 Qg6+
@@ -78,9 +79,9 @@ I'm only a pawn down.})
 55.Rd1+ Ke8
 56.Kc7 Rc2+
 57.Kb8 Rg2
-58.Rh1 Kd8 {And it's a draw! Unbelievable!!! Chess is so cruel.}
+58.Rh1 Kd8 {And it's a draw! Unbelievable! Chess can be so cruel.}
   (58...Kd7 {would've won. The difference is that now I don't have the access
-to the c6 square. For example,} 59.b7 g5 {(the only winning move!} 60.Ka7 Ra2+
+to the c6 square. For example,} 59.b7 g5 {(the only winning move!)} 60.Ka7 Ra2+
 61.Kb6 Rb2+ {and I have to return to a7.} 62.Ka7 {and now anything wins for
 Black, because he's just in time to play g4 and g3.})
 59.b7 {The only drawing move!} Ra2
@@ -91,10 +92,10 @@ Black, because he's just in time to play g4 and g3.})
 g5 67.Rh1 {and his rook is overloaded.})
 63.Rd1+ Ke8
 64.Kc7 Rc2+
-65.Kb8 {messing it up.} Rg2 {returning the favour.}
+65.Kb8 {Messing it up.} Rg2 {Returning the favour.}
   (65...g5 66.Re1+ Kd7 67.Rd1+ Ke6 {and so forth.})
 66.Kc7 Rc2+
-67.Kb8 {allowing the same line.} Rg2
+67.Kb8 {Allowing the same line.} Rg2
 68.Kc7 Rc2+
 69.Kb8
   (69.Kb8 g5 {would've won again, but it seems like neither of us saw it.})